heart……此句的变化形式为it is widely expected that….lesson 27,(1.1) It has
been said that everyone lives by selling something…
五、修辞手法多样。
Lesson 23,(1.14) …a huge number of snails taking a stroll on some
of my prize plants. (拟人) lesson 31,(1.9) ...his eccentricity had
become legendary long before he died.(hyperbole)
六、简洁。
在lesson 12,(1.3)里有一句对荒岛理想生活的描述,看起来非常普通:Life there is simple and
good.这句话非常干净利落地描述了整个理想化后的荒岛生活,我们写作也是如此,一篇好的文章就应该是simple and good.
七、语言的渲染力。
Lesson 42.(1.29) In the eerie silence of the cavern, the only sound
that could be heard was made by water which dripped continuously
from the high dome above them. 仅仅用eerie来修饰silence
就充分体现了这种寂静的特别,使人有身临其境的感觉。
总而言之,学习新三,可以从选词,结构,谋篇,修辞手法,语言的简洁与张力等各方面提高学生的写作能力。
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